Tuesday. 4.10.07 2:43 am
Dear My Prince Charming a.k.a My Soulmate and Guardians,
Wrote a poem yesterday despite my lecturer was infront of me critisizing our hardwork answer. This poem is about Gaia our Mother Earth, please forgive me if my description sucks, because im trying my very best to improve and modify my end masterpiece, and lastly, please enjoyed.
Wind blew
And thunder drummed
The melody awoke Gaia
From her long centuries sleep
She opened her eyes
Once the sky turned blue
Her beautiful crystal blue eyes shines
As if the eyes were the earth itself
Slowly, she helped herself for standing up
And her body figures reviewed
Every single human will be impressed
As if she is reviewing the figure of land and mountain
She walked near the window,
And the sun shines and blushes her skin
A slight blush on her cheek
Reviewed how pretty she is
Slowly she walked out from the house
The nature was dancing with joy
Celebrating her awaken
That they had long waited
When she walked along the road
Her hair was loosen
Showing long, black and soft healthy hair
As soft as the cotton cloud in the sky
The lake shined as if it was calling for her
The aroma of the lake drew her there
She kneeled down at the lake bank
And had a sip to wet her throat
Her lips that was no longer dry
Shows a shiny red
Her wet lips were crystal clear
As if it were the water itself
Categories: Poetry [t]
man. u should describe gaia like the girls in shampoo ads la.. swinging their hair like nobody business and all guys will be drawn to gaia. bwahaha
u should make the verbs to present tense. i think it gives better effects like emily dickinson poems.
» renaye on 2007-04-10 02:51:35
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